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#1 Chris Thomas

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Posted 24 March 2008 - 10:04 AM

CrobarCars turned me onto the photobucket remix. I think I will make one for every full detail, and during the follow up - give the customer the URL for their remix album. I will try to make all of them 1 min 30 sec. and let me know about transitions, time intervals, of anything else you notice.

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Posted 24 March 2008 - 10:12 AM

I liked it. Transitions were good (didn't really care for the sun/camera spots one though in the middle but if you like it go for it). Oh, you've got buffer "trials" in one of the first slides instead of trails. Good job. :thumbsupup[1]:

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Posted 24 March 2008 - 10:32 AM

View PostCharlies02GLS, on Mar 24 2008, 11:12 AM, said:

I liked it. Transitions were good (didn't really care for the sun/camera spots one though in the middle but if you like it go for it). Oh, you've got buffer "trials" in one of the first slides instead of trails. Good job. :thumbsupup[1]:

Changed the typo, thanks! Changed transitions between angles, added two more section dividers, changed time on a couple slides so it would end at a better place in the song. Did it help? Oh, and I couldn't find a better B/A transition than the sunspot although I agree that it's a little distracting.
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Posted 24 March 2008 - 11:06 AM

Section dividers helped a good bit and it also helps remind you who's done the work so I like that addition. For the song, I honestly wasn't paying much attention to the tune the first time around so...maybe?

The shutter is a nice transition for me because it's got the same effect as a fade in/out. Also, thinking about it some more I don't really mind the sun spots since they convey a sort of polishing/clean message which works pretty well.

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Posted 24 March 2008 - 11:31 AM

View PostCharlies02GLS, on Mar 24 2008, 12:06 PM, said:

Section dividers helped a good bit and it also helps remind you who's done the work so I like that addition. For the song, I honestly wasn't paying much attention to the tune the first time around so...maybe?

The shutter is a nice transition for me because it's got the same effect as a fade in/out. Also, thinking about it some more I don't really mind the sun spots since they convey a sort of polishing/clean message which works pretty well.

Thanks for taking the time, I think that'll be my final. I'm posting a Tundra with the same guidlines in minute.

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Posted 24 March 2008 - 09:08 PM

Hey Chris,

Nice show presentation.
I have been doing this type of production for my clients going on two years now and they love it!
When sending your client their reminder for maintenance include their link...seems to sell itself.
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Posted 24 March 2008 - 09:41 PM

Well Done!
I like the dividers. I like to focus on the pics and work done, For me the song is distracting. I prefer the instrumentals, but that is my bias. Nice work on the car.

Look forward to your next project.
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